Tuesday, May 3, 2011

Love Trainer 5000 part one

Lets try something a little different. Last nite I started this short story about Mandy. A nice college girl that is turned on with bondage, losing control, and the fear and excitement of being discovered. Lets see how it does, if one person likes it I will write the rest.

4 comments:

  1. Mmmm I really like where this is going, can't wait to see what happens next.

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  2. It looks like you get to find out about this time tomorrow. :)

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  3. Whoa, very interesting setup there Geofrey. You had me caught by the second page, and I am very interested in seeing what happens next!

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  4. Caitlyn im going to give you a spoiler. Tonight I write the second of at least three parts. That part will end with a cliffhanger. There will be multiple options for how the story progresses from there. And someone that comments tomorrow will get to chose it! I think im going to enjoy this!

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